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Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 1:56pm for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

Excellent chapter, although I'm surprised Centi was able to move to hold him...or did he scream for the full remaining two and a half hours of her reaction? Yikes!!!

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 1:53pm for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

Great chapter! Hogwart's security really sucks, doesn't it?

So, I'm guessing Harry's going to get something closer to his original full 6ft plus height and a nice power boost out of this. The question is, was it just Harry being Harry, or something to do with the eye-speak spell with Centi, or what?

Thanks for sharing this with us.

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 1:24pm for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

Wow. This next chapter here just continues to drive this story up past so many fics that I've read. The developing relationship between Harry and Millicent feels very natural and unforced, not at all like a relation or two from canon(won't say anymore, LOL), and I can see them bonding like they have here.

Snape continues to ask for a slap or three, and Dumbledore continues to be so oblivious sometimes that it's just incredible. DE's get into the infirmary, and he seems to play around with them and then complains when Harry does what he does very well in this fic, stops them cold. Really enjoyed the way that the Doctor described things here, and the way that Harry charged in, though Ron...Ron, is very simplistic in his views at times.

Given that, he still needs a good smack as well for his big mouth, and honestly thought Harry was going to do just that for a bit. Don't wager that Gin will be happy that Harry and Centi have gotten closer, though it was sweet the way the kiss happened here. Very well done, and can't wait to see the next part of this, what has become one of my favorites of all the stories I currently read.

mathiasgranger posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 12:57pm for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

Definitely a different take on the Paladin program here.

Dumbledore remains completely obtuse...and while the Harry/Milicent pairing is growing on me slowly...it still feels slightly off in terms of interaction between the characters.

Thanks for writing,
Matt