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texasranger_10 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th February 2008 10:01am for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

why does ever authur have to make harry hurt so much. but it was a good chappy none the less.

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 26th February 2008 9:27am for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

Wow! This is such a powerful story. Of course Harry has been through the ringer with injuries and the Paladin potion and everything else he has gone through. Then to watch Millicent be treated so badly by Snape and everyone else. That has to rub his Gryfindor nerves raw. Now to go through hell with the regeneration potion is really terrible. Being Harry though he will get through it. At least Millicent is doing thr right thing. Holding him and doing what she can to help him. The Doctor and Pomphrey pulling the prank on them was great though. I am so glad they turned it back on them. That was priceless. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms

warpwizard posted a comment on Tuesday 26th February 2008 8:00am for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

Good chapter. Very meaty.

Christopher Patton posted a comment on Tuesday 26th February 2008 5:23am for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

This is an amazing chapter, I have to say that I'm enjoying this story much more than the other two that are on parallel storylines.

I like the flow of this chapter and I like the character development in this chapter. The confrontations between Harry and Ron as well as between Harry and Dumbledore are very well written.

I will most definitely be looking forward to more of this story.

oso983 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th February 2008 5:05am for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

Its great to have you back! When does the next chapter come?

Crys posted a comment on Tuesday 26th February 2008 4:58am for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

> "Always giving people the benefit of the doubt," I sneered.
*sigh* AD, you're heart's in the right place, but you have much too much faith in humanity.

Ouch. That potion looked like it hurt.
[Crys's PotterMuse smacks him. "Duh! That's what Aaran St Vines was trying to point out, you blithering idiot!"
"You don't sound very British."
Crys's PotterMuse smacks him again.]

Hmm. Looks like Harry will
A) become much more powerful
B) make his 6'2"

*ponder* Wonder if Snape's oath will kill him. Or if AD (and his vaunted expertise) had something to do with this.

oldman posted a comment on Tuesday 26th February 2008 4:25am for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

Hi again!
I only read this because I was anxiously waiting for updates on Granger defense and Great Scott Potter. With this story your story telling ability does not waiver in the slightest!! It's great and full of surprises.
Thankyou but please do not neglect the others.

Oldman

bonnie posted a comment on Tuesday 26th February 2008 3:59am for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

This was a very good chapter. I like the relationship developing between Harry and Centi. And that Harry is noticing more what's going on around him such as when the aurors came after the attack and voicing his opinions in a very mature if sometimes angry way. I'm really enjoying this story. Hope you update again soon.

noylj posted a comment on Tuesday 26th February 2008 1:38am for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

What a horrible way to end the chapter! I assume that they haven't had the botched potion yet in this story or did I miss something at the beginning? I would like to think that you are only a day or two away from posting the next chapter, but I suspect that it will be a while.

Kinsfire posted a comment on Tuesday 26th February 2008 1:37am for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

I forget - in this one, has Harry been told about the oath that Dumbles took in order to remain sane? The oath that pretty much dooms the British wizarding world for as long as Dumbles tries to run the war effort?

Actually, knowing that oath, his actions are criminal. He probably knows this as well.

I have a sneaking suspicion that Ron might not come around until such point as he's managed to permanently damage his friendship with Harry.

Excellent work on this story.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Tuesday 26th February 2008 12:47am for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

WOW! Great chapter! I greatly enjoyed the whole thing especially harry's repeated smackdowns on dumbles. Very good. The bits with snape were well done. The surgery stuff was excellent also! Cheers!!!

Tira Misu posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 9:42pm for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

OMG update! JOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mickey posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 9:36pm for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

Very nice chapter, although I found Dumbledore's insistence on going through official channels (something I can't recall him ever doing in canon) odd.

If I didn't say this before I really like the belivable way you've got Harry and Milli get together.

Oh and I hate you for the ending :-)
Hope you update soon

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 8:54pm for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

LOL at Princess Centi. I like Harry's attack on Dumbledore and the scenes between the aurors. I wasn't so sure of Ron's reaction to Millicent but it works within the fic. Binderly was very funny, especially the way he decided Harry needed to kiss Centi. Nice turn of the tables.

Ouch! Poor Harry. That was quite a cruel ending. Good to see this continued. More please. I wonder if he'll grow beyond his projected height of another three inches.

The Midnight Poster posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 8:02pm for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

I like what you've done for Miss Bulstrode. I can't see her staying in Slytherin though. Is going to take on a new ID?

morriganscrow posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 6:21pm for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

Wonderful chapter.
I do love your version of Centi, a grossly overlooked character, and you write her beautifully.

berni posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 4:56pm for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

aw, that seems like millicent's first 'care about harry' moment. check whether her mouth is working, ha. awesome chapter! can't wait for more!

mjc posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 3:46pm for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

OK...where to begin...

Umm...

Right...

This one is turning out, I don't know, more refined? than the other Paladin stories. Plus the somewhat 'snarky' Harry, a definite plus.

Ron needs a bit more than a mallet...maybe a Wagner #10 firmly applied to that box of rocks sitting atop his shoulders? How can someone not named Crabbe or Goyle be so dense?

And, just what are you doing to Harry now?

FenrisWolf posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 3:35pm for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

I knew it. I *knew* as soon as I read the synopsis you would insist on the cliche', that since Hermione wasn't with Harry, she *must* choose Ron as her boyfriend, despite the fact that you're writing him as an even greater waste of space than usual. Why? WHY!?! WHY?!? Doesn't Hermione have a brain, or is she just so sompletely overpowered by Weasley Pheromones (and there's a disgusting thought) that her brain has shut down?

nancy in chicago posted a comment on Monday 25th February 2008 2:41pm for Chapter Four - The Things I Do For Science

I'm very much enjoying this version of this story. I think the other 2 are so close, it's confusing, this one is just fun! & I like this pairing, since it's so unusual & to do it well, like you are doing, is a challenge (for you) & a delght (for me).

nancy in chicago