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Carol Layland posted a comment on Monday 7th July 2008 7:57am for Chapter Twenty - The Founding Mothers and Fathers

Hi, Well, if you are into history it is a very good chapter but it does take a lot of following exactly where you are going with the information. Unfortunately I will have to reread this chapter several times to properly learn what you are teaching here. Since I hold degrees in both English and History I will definately look forward to properly understanding just where you took this information.

noylj posted a comment on Monday 7th July 2008 7:10am for Chapter Twenty - The Founding Mothers and Fathers

I couldn't read most of the history lesson in this chapter, as I don't care. The little I did read reminded me of all the fanfics where almost everybody famous in the mundane world turn out to the wizards, witches, or squibs. It just seems that in all these stories, all the really important historical moments, good or bad, revolve around the magical world.
I'm also "amazed" that Harry is "spreading the wealth" around and bringing in other people for his business plans. Justin already as something to work on and Greenbee has a restaurant.
Great story.

David Thacker posted a comment on Monday 7th July 2008 4:55am for Chapter Twenty - The Founding Mothers and Fathers

If Harry can find out the the votes where lost only for ten generations he an point that out and get the family thier votes back.

Tumshie posted a comment on Monday 7th July 2008 4:07am for Chapter Twenty - The Founding Mothers and Fathers

Nice to see this story continuing.
Just one point, surely the department to stop magical folk from leaving the country would have an Emigration department not an Immigration department as although they would be immigrants in the country they arrived in they would be emigrants from the country they left.