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Crys posted a comment on Sunday 15th February 2009 1:39pm for Chapter Twenty-Two - A Day That Will Live In Infamy!

Nice touch on making Winky cry for just ten seconds. House-elves aren't human, so their emotions aren't the same. As you aptly pointed out.

The original "Day of Infamy" speech is a powerful moment in American history. Watching Fudge bastardize it (and botch it horrifically), was just painful.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Sunday 15th February 2009 12:47pm for Chapter Twenty-Two - A Day That Will Live In Infamy!

Huzzah! Glad to see it up :)

noylj posted a comment on Sunday 15th February 2009 10:49am for Chapter Twenty-Two - A Day That Will Live In Infamy!

How did Hermione get in Diagon Alley with Ginny and Harry?
In your other story, you seemed to have Ginny in a scene I didn't think she was actually in.
You have the same problem JKR has: how to explain Herms putting up with Ron? The lad is a waste of sperm and should have been left with Lav-lav, except your Lavender is too good for him.
Thanks for updating. Thanks for nice long chapters.
However, you have Harry's girlfriends in the two stories just a little too similar in what they say and how they react.

amulder posted a comment on Sunday 15th February 2009 9:24am for Chapter Twenty-Two - A Day That Will Live In Infamy!

Aaran...
Just want to drop a short note of encouragement.
This is one of the most ambitious and complex and unique stories out there. I applaud all your efforts.
I still stand awed that you're generating two versions of this at once. But I confess I only read this version, as I think reading both would be confusing for me, and I prefer the H/G flavour.

Interesting that the Prophet is still so biased. It allows H to pursue the Quibbler angle, but still kind of odd that the ownership would be so shrouded in secrecy.

Have we seen the end of Dolores? Or is she still going to be a thorn in Harry's side? Seems unlikely with how she drew her wand in the Wizengamot.

thanks again,
...art

nuclear death frog posted a comment on Sunday 15th February 2009 8:05am for Chapter Twenty-Two - A Day That Will Live In Infamy!

It feels like forever since this was updated, but good show overall nonetheless.