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Bronte7723 posted a comment on Tuesday 8th July 2008 8:46pm for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

Hi,

I'm just catching up again. I enjoy the story but I have a minor quibble.

I'm a Kiwi. New Zealand's Army is not Royal. We have RNZAF, the Royal NZ Air Force, and the Royal NZ Navy, but the Armny is the the New Zealand Army. If it were royal, then it would be the RNZA not the NZRA, the Royal always goes first.
IN addition they all belong to the NZ Defence Force, one force with three services.

Otherwise, I'm loving the story.

Carol Layland posted a comment on Thursday 10th April 2008 7:07am for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

How totally wonderful. I have been sick for over 4 months and I must apologize for not being more prompt with reading my emails and getting back to you with reviews. Your quality of entrancing me continues.

Patches posted a comment on Friday 28th December 2007 5:29pm for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

Wow! This is a great chapter. Harry really made some inroads into the Wizagamot! Ticked off Madamme Sheets and Fudge and Umbridge really well. He also made some good friends that were peers of his grandfather. That will deffinitely be a plus. I'm glad he has met the Tonks'. With all these people on his side it has to make a big difference it the progress of this war. It also helps that there are fewer Death Eaters in the world to help Moldyshorts! Now let's find out what the "Brigadiere" has planned for Steph Granger. I look forward to the next chapter. I really like the Paladin Unitverse and I am following both stories with equal interest. Thanks for writing. pms

in-fanficauthors posted a comment on Friday 14th December 2007 8:22am for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

Very nice as always, though I think the Nuremburg Trails are a very nice stroll, but I agree, nowhere near as famous as the Nuremburg Trials.

I am anxious to see where you go from here.

Donald McLeod posted a comment on Thursday 13th December 2007 11:54am for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

Good ,I like the deep histery that go's back to 'Olive Hands time'. Also your use of finice, and venture capitel Tools to rase the magical business world up, Whitch seems sort of stagnant, at least compared to Muggles.

noylj posted a comment on Monday 10th December 2007 6:48pm for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

More.
Love the story.
I am going to read this one until it ends, then read the Granger Defense. Trying to simultaneously read both just wasn't working.

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Monday 10th December 2007 12:28pm for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

Another great chapter! Harry seems to be learning how to be a political mover and shaker quickly.

When is Ma-DAAM Sheets going to realise that if you want to kill Harry, or anybody with him, you have to send more then 5 or 6 death eaters? He'll just slowly weed down their ranks slowly, and then go after the 'big fish'.

Glad to see Harry meeting with the Tonks' that should be very good for the story.

Hermione was missing from this chapter - I hope she's not studying too hard in the library. Maybe we can see her next chapter?

Again, a great chapter. I look forward to your next installment.

Rick

soloven posted a comment on Monday 10th December 2007 6:51am for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

Great chapter, What happend to Ginny, Harry and Justin's Buisness breakfast. did it get canceled or did harry have 2 back to back.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Sunday 9th December 2007 1:03pm for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

I enjoyed this, as always! I love seeing a politically savvy Harry.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Sunday 9th December 2007 12:42pm for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

Good chapter. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 9th December 2007 11:38am for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

Well, now, that chapter was quite clearly worth the wait. Several interesting scenes and some fascinating new information. I think Harry's maturing to where he's getting a much better handle on the variety of things he needs to do and master to properly accomplish his purposes. I think Fudge, Umbridge, and the rest of the Pureblood bigots had best be watching out, especially since he demonstrates such convincing abilities.

The last scene indicates that there's another player 'bout to enter the game, 'twill be interesting to see more on whom and what role they'll play.

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Sunday 9th December 2007 10:49am for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

Fabulous chapter. I love the politiking and fervor that Harry has created. I was soooo very much hoping that Sheets would draw her wand, it would have been rather humorous to see Harry defeat her with his one free shot.

I eagerly look forward to more and more people flocking towards Harry's banner and putting the pressure, both financially and politically, on those who would stand in his way.

I do have to wonder just why Dumbledore has not tried to exert his influence over the wizangamot over the years... but that is another kettle of fish entirely.

oldman posted a comment on Sunday 9th December 2007 10:42am for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

Long time coming or that is how its felt; BUT worth the wait. You are really building up a very detailed world politically and almost making the death eater response as an irritating side line! How many dead at Harry's hand so far? So I wonder if you are going to give us some Voldermort thoughts?

STONEGNOME posted a comment on Sunday 9th December 2007 9:38am for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

I appear to have bolixed my password so I can not do a signed review. This is a wonderful story. If this is as I suspect the beginning of a unit crossover I am even more delighted. The idea of some deatheater saying 'We have disabled the wards' and then hitting a muggle alarm system or better yet a mine field or Claymore.... I look forward to future episodes with only the reservation that I find my self rereading the story form the beginning. meciyssryh

Darian Barry posted a comment on Sunday 9th December 2007 9:29am for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

At least I know why it takes so long for an update (I think). The chapters are, are longer than the ordinary, well thought out, chock full of information and action. Some have to be read twice to digest it all.
Even though I am sitting medicine, I thought for a bit about law, so 'some' of the legal things made sense, although quite complicated, it WAS business and contract law. I won't bother to comment on Umbridge. She would make a good road-kill, just as Rita should be stomped on and become instant beetle juice!
Darian

thefatadder posted a comment on Sunday 9th December 2007 4:40am for Chapter Eighteen - There's Fighting and Then There's Fighting

Brilliant, Wizardmott, a quick fight and some business as well. fantastic chapter, and the next part cant come too soon.

Getting tempted to go back and start reading from scrach again!